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Taken at Werribee Mansion.

It's a really beautiful place, where roses and all sorts of other flowers carpeted the grass like paint drops. At the time, there was a couple getting married. Wish them all the best for the future :heart:



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Canon EOS 60D EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS Lens
Image size
1024x683px 1.13 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 60D
Shutter Speed
1/197 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
34 mm
ISO Speed
160
Date Taken
Jan 13, 2013, 3:42:22 PM
Sensor Size
6mm
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Hey!

You wanted me to write you a critique for this one. As I tell everyone I write for; don't mind the star-ratings, they aren't informative.

Photographically:
Ok, so you found yourself a frame in a frame and a leadingline. This is one step down the road to capture a very good photo. However when you've found these it's important to work the angles, so you'll give the viewer something captivating.
The flower gate is a nice frame to this scene, so walking a little bit closer and lowering the angle of your shot here would make a huge difference.
I'll add a video in the end, so you'll get an idea of how to approach these things.
For some reason the image seem a little diffuse to me, maybe your focus is slightly off or something similar.

Post-processing:
Adding some clarity, contrast and vibrance would do wonders here. You've got Photoshop CS6, so I'm guessing you've also got Bridge which is a great tool to do global adjustments.
When you've done these adjustments, take the photo into photoshop and add some sharpening and you've got yourself an image with some extra pop to it.

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I hope this was helpful and I recommend you to watch the video when you have the time for it.