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July 2
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Canon
Model
Canon EOS 60D
Shutter Speed
1/41 second
Aperture
F/2.2
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
320
Date Taken
May 18, 2014, 12:31:06 PM
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Adobe Photoshop CS6 (Windows)
Sensor Size
19mm
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Chocolate Brownies and Milk by FlabnBone Chocolate Brownies and Milk by FlabnBone
All the Small Things by FlabnBone

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Hmmm, well, I think it's a good photo because of the light and how did you used, it's natural and that's difficult to do with nature light :)
But you could use another glasses or another kind of containers to be more interesting, another kind of paper, or maybe editing that white paper to have more impact on Brownies and Brownies, but just a little.
I'm a little confused cuz' I don't know what's the real message in this photo, I can't understand, and sorry about that. For me it's just a delicious meal or snack with some photo filters and nothing else.
To make a good impact, and that's really important, you need to put color, and attract the sight to something. But I can't understand or see what kind of message are you trying to communicate or what thing would you like me to see and say ¡Wow! that's so delicious..? or.. what are you trying to say really? I can't say YUMMY! :( are just brownies, some chocolate and milk.
Your vision is confusing, your originality, I don't understand it because of your vision and I just can see there are just some brownies...
Your technique it's simply and soft, using nature light (I think, it's probable) and at last It doesn't impact me really, it's a good photo, but I only can say that.
You just need to impact with one thing :) and you're done, remember to make some contrast and not using only soft lights. Remember more color and contrast.
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8AmyEmo8 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yummy This looks so good! *q*
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yumisy111 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
looks tasty :D hehe
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